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작년에 속도 낮춤, 실패, 다른 마을의 도로 보수공사를 이행해야했어야함. 타마을의 도로공사가 사고율을 낮춘 주요인아닐 수도 있음, 단지 인구가 줄었거나, 사람들이 계속 공사중인줄 알고 도로를 이용안했을수도
속도가 낮아진게 효과가 없다. 거짓 사람들이 모르고 있었을수 있음,
The Auther asserts that Prunty County should improve thier roads as thier neighbor, Butler County did instead of decreasing the speed limit because lowering speed limit seems not effective. However, i do not think his assumption resonable and he should consider many other factors which could effect the accidental rates in Prunty County.
First of all, he asserts that the main cause of declination of accidental rate in Butler County is road improvement. However, it seems that this argument has logical defects. This is because renovated road might not be the only factor to have influence on the lowering accidents. It is possible that the population rate of Bulter County could be decreased somehow so that there would be not as many cars as before. In addition, it is probable that people would just not use the improved roads because it is still under construction. Therefore, if the author concluded without considering other factors, his conclusion would not be accurate to solve thier town's trouble.
In addition, the author concluded that Prunty County's effort to diminish accidental rate by lowering speed limiit was worthless based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. However, he just overlook the fact that the reports by the highway patrol is not absolutely correct. This is because highway patrol are not always checking traffic accidents and professional to anaylze the result of accidents. Instead, he might use any other authorized organization to control accidental rate. Also, it is possible that people is unware of the speed limit lowered due to lack of advertisement. If people drove slowly awaring to new speed limit, the accidental rate could be diminished.
To conclude, the author's augument which they should renovate old roads to decreae traffic accidents as like thier neighborhood is not reasonable and has many flaws because it seems that he did not consider many other factors which should be reflected to his conclusion. ,
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