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Many modern societies are suffering from
rising rates of financial crimes causing multitudes of social problems. With
the extreme capitalism capitalist atmosphere and lack of education which can account accounts for this
situation, the victims of these crimes experience severe aftermath.
There are several reasons why crimes
regarding finance are increasingly being committed. Firstly, the world in an
era of capitalism has encouraged people to yearn for more money, resulting in
some people who are willing to take illegal actions to do so without sense of guilt. Secondly, while
majority of citizens have had sufficient education of utilizing the Iinternet, lack
of lessons on morality especially related to moral and information lessons have exposed people to the pool of intellectual
crimes online. For instance, for those who do not know the significant value of
personal financial data and information might expose them it on their social media which
can attract identity theft criminals. 사례 내용이 '교육과 의식이 부족해서'라는 내 입장을 뒷받침해줄 수 있도록 더 요소를 보완해주세요.
The situation has made a lot of victims
with different problems. One expected problem could be that the victim’s
credibility level might be degraded because of the crime involved with his or
her identity. This could affect their use of bank services in later life such
as being rejected in loans. Another negative aspect that these people face is
possibilities of further crimes. This may happen if the one’s stolen identity which spreads among the criminal are is not deleted. On top of these, in terms of the society, it can also be the problem that the victims are also
likely to lose faith in their government for not preventing the crimes and not
dealing with the outcomes properly.
In conclusion, the current social
atmosphere and the lack of sense in securing personal data result in financial
crimes, leaving many people in danger of being a victim which can cause them to
suffer for a long time. 피해자들이 받을 영향들(본론2 내용)도 간단히 결론에서 정리해주세요.
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