Your Answer ▼ Since the publishing industry has lost a lot of things (이런 표현을 보고 채점관들은 "vague" 혹은 "ambiguous"라고 표현합니다. 그 lot of things에서 말씀하시는 things가 정확히 무엇인지 명시하지 않을거라면 이 표현은 그저 감점요소일 뿐입니다.) by the advent of e-books, the recent increased numbers in users of e-book devices is definitely not a good sign. By the way, (이런거 쓰지 말라고 말씀드렸죠?) buying and using the devices are much beneficial for (여기 문법 검토하세요) people’s convenient lifestyles.
If more people read e-books, it may threaten the publishing industry significantly. (매우 강력한 topic sentence입니다. 깔끔하고 단도직입적이네요. 상당히 훌륭합니다.) As the market of e-book (e-book market으로 하세요) devices grows, consumers will not buy printed books because using them is handier to carry. This circumstance also leads to the increase of unemployment rate of the industry. One recent article shows that many popular magazine companies closed their business due to poor sales. Most CEO (여기 문법 검토하세요) of these companies chose the reason of declaring bankrupt is that (여기 문법 검토하세요) their companies do not need to publish books in paper anymore due to development (여기 문법 검토하세요) of e-books and devices. Only in the UK last year, surprisingly,(이런거 쓰지 말라고 말씀드렸죠?) more than a thousand of employees in publishing companies got layoff.
However, this change also has benefits. (완벽에 가깝습니다. 매 문단의 첫 문장은 그 문단의 첫인상과도 같죠. 매우 훌륭합니다.) One of them is easy to access to content.(여기 문법 검토하세요) People can enjoy reading books immediately after downloading them. They do not need to take time to get to bookstores and find what they want to read. All people need to do is few clicks. (문법도 틀린 문장이기는 하지만, 필요없는 문장이기도 합니다. 결결국 앞에서 하신 말씀 반복하시는거밖에 안돼요) Not only this, (어색합니다) they do not have to worry about carrying heavy books as they did in the past. E-book devices encourage them to read easier and more convenient (여기 문법 검토하세요). What’s more, people can read more books because e-books are generally much cheaper than the printed ones. In Korea, for example, the figure of adult reading rate has increased after prevalence of e-book devices. Among readers, more than 40 per cent of them use e-book devices, and the rate is still going up.
While the unemployment rate of the publishing industry due to the occurrence of e-book devices has been a new social problem, people should acknowledge and adapt this trend. Also, people are more likely to have convenient lifestyles, so this world needs to focus on the advantages of e-book devices.
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