When it comes to charging for museum
admissions, there is a growing debate over whether their fee should be offered for free or not.
Although some people argued that museums should be opened for visitors to
visit them(바로 앞에 했던 말과 반복됩니다. 최대한 필요없는 말 지워주세요) freely, I strongly believe that museums charge(공짜를 말하는건가요?아님 돈을 내라는건가요? 이중적 의미) is necessary to keep
their items intact.(소중하게?를 의미한다면 safe가 더 맞는 단어입니다)
These days, museums are the great place for
people to know about the history and culture of one specific place and museum’s
own purpose is to propagate their own values for a lot of people as many people as possible.
However, the charge for museums hinders the public to appreciate them freely.
This is because the entrance fee plays a decisive role to limit the number of
the visitors, and prohibits them from experiencing a quantity of cultural heritage.
Thus, the museums should not charge admission to do function their own purpose(???무슨 의민가요? 이 논리라면 병원도 원래 의도가 아픈 사람들을 고치는거니까 돈을 안 내도 되나요??),
which is to provide much more opportunities and spread their values.
In spite of the above arguments, I believe
that museum admissions are essential to keep their heritages safe and enable
their place to operate managing systems properly. Museums have a plenty of
cultural heritages such as antique items or sculptures, which have precious
cultural values. These are so priceless that they have to be spent need a lot of money on maintaining and managing them. The only way for museums to keep their goods is admissions such as entrance fee from their visitors. In addition, entrance
charges play an important role to deter a person who has a high possibility to
damage their items. If their charges have been provided for free, it would be
impossible to keep their items intact.(디테일 설명 더 필요합니다)Therefore, the admissions are vital to
preserving their heritages safe.
To sum up, there are convincing arguments
both for and against the free admission of museums, but I am convinced that the
benefits of charging for the museum admission outweigh them in the long term.