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Over countless times, humans have evolved
with more and more with new technologies. At this point, it is often discussed
whether the human history has evolved from an ancient cultures or past achievements
have been ignored and developed only in the present. This essay will compare
both opinions and present my opinion.
It is understandable that in the modern
times there have been plenty of progress in all aspects of our life. First, the
illiteracy rate has decreased. In other words, more people can access books and
hi-tech information. For instance, the illiteracy rate in Korea is less than
3%. Second, the science has made great advances. Thanks to technological
developments in human organism and medical care, the average life span is now
over 80. In addition, as the medical robots have developed, it is invented to
perform surgical operations and treatments in the medical field that were
impossible in the past. 주제에서 설명하는 내용은 인간이 몰랐던 것을 알게 되면서 역사가 이루어졌다는 입장과, 과거에서부터 '성취'함으로써 발전을 일구었다고 보는 입장의 대립으로 보는 편이 적절할 것 같습니다. 본론1에서 오늘날 얼마나 발전해있는지를 설명하는 것만으로는 'a journey from ignorance to knowledge'라 보는 입장을 뒷받침하기 어려울 것 같아요.
On the other hand, tThose who advocate “it should not underestimate
ancient culture” also have their reasons. People of ancient culture have made
numerous innovations and discoveries. Using stone tools and using fire, these
were an absolutely great achievements at that time. For instance, the technology to
build the pyramids in Egypt is an innovative construction method in the present
age. Moreover, we ought not to forget that the inventions we are using today
are actually a gradual evolution of the past.
To conclusion, both viewpoints have their merits. However, Eearly development is a stepping stone to the current
generation. I believe that the establishment of this society is based on the past invention
and discovery, even if the people of today's generation are at the hi-tech of
civilization. |