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It is true that there are various ways that students opt for their job career these days. in the present. Some people claim that applying to college or university is the best option for teenagers for the future. However, other people claim that straight choosing their job right after graduating from high school is better than studying in university or college. 두 입장뿐 아니라 나의 입장도 함께 제시해야 하는 문제이므로 서론에서 내 입장까지 함께 이야기해주어야 해요.
To begin with, there are some people arguing that opting a job straight after graduating from school provides much more opportunities for success in their job field. This is because it gives more job experiences to adolescents since a their young age, which makes them do more career training and improve their job abilities. Therefore, according to in terms of their job ability, they can easily adapt to their work environment and obtain opportunities of promotion promoting earlier than university graduates. students majoring in university.
However, other people claim that studying in university or college helps students to choose better career option. To be more precise, it makes it possible for students to learn knowledge of their jobs and experience their career beforehand. In practice, a great number of universities in Korea, for example, Korean university provides various internship programs to their college students, which brings about allows students to opt more suitable their work field. Moreover, students can develop their beneficial human networks in college. For instance, studying with those similar aged perform can form their friendship and a kind of social community. Accordingly, it can make it possible for students to help each other and share information related to their job field not only when they study in college but also when they work at a company after graduation. graduating.
In conclusion, both views have their strong points. However, it seems more convincing that studying at university or college has many benefits: the contribution to choosing more suitable work field and developing a beneficial human network. 결론에서만 나의 입장을 밝히는 것은 글의 일관성을 해칩니다. 본론 안에 핵심 내용을 모두 넣어주고 결론은 간단하게 글을 갈무리하는 역할만 하게끔 정리해주세요. 본론2에서 '하지만 나는 이렇게 생각한다'하는 식으로 반대의견과 함께 내 입장을 같이 밝혀주세요.
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