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since many countries were industrialised, we have been living in busy life. As a result, the lifestyle has affected women’s social status which rose. and it has been risen. It is issued who should nurse their children. So i would like to talk about how important mother and father are. the importance of parents.
To begin with, people are likely to think mother plays key roles in the upbringing of children, so most of women takes care of them (them 이 누군가요?)at home. Some households have arguments about the reason why only mother should be in charge of looking after their children and the right of women to leave and work out of the house.(무슨 뜻인가요?)
In fact, being brought up by women is essential, but it has been a stereotype in society. From that, we don’t usually take consideration into the importance of father’s role with children at home. Normally, people say that women have stronger mother’s instinctive love, compared to father’s and it is logically true. Regardless of the strength of father’s, however, it would not be negligible(?). Thus, society has to attempt to change the awareness of that people think both mother and father have to take the concerted responsibility. (?)It is due to that parents have their own ability individually. In other words, children could learn and obtain their parents’ aptitudes variously, more than only mother’s. Furthermore, it would help with their social skills to adapt many of communities because they would experience and achieve such skills from their parents(어떻게 배우는 건지/뭘 배우는건지 설명 필요)
In conclusion, we need to regard the father’s role for their children as one of vital factors for upbringing of children, so parents try to do the best to look after their children each other. Moreover, society should take steps to change people’s realization that enlightens the necessity of both parents to children.
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