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This line graph illustrate how much carbon dioxide(CO2) was emissioned on average per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
First of all, the UK emissioned the largest amount of CO2 among given 4countries, at approaching over 10metric tonnes in 1967 while Portugal emissioned CO2 only just over 1metric ton at the same year. The average CO2 emissions of the UK decreased gradually after 1997 and dropped to roughly 9metric tonnes in 2007. Conversely, those of Portugal showed a steady increase for 40years and then reached about 5metric tonnes in 2007 reducing the gap of the amount of CO2 emissions between these two countries from about 10 to 4metric tonnes.
In case of Sweden and Italy, they released CO2 just over 8 and 4metric tonnes respectively in 1967 and the amount of CO2 emissions in both countries increased rapidly until 1977. However, as those of Seweden fell dramatically from about 10 to 7metric tonnes between 1997 and 1987, the average CO2 emissions in Sweden and Italy were reversed in 1987.
Generally, the UK and Sweden showed a marked decline in average CO2 emissions per person over the period for 40years while Italy and Portugal released more CO2 than before.