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Maintaining and looking after our
environment healthy and safe are fundamental parts of any for every community.
Nonetheless, it is not difficult to witness that dumped rubbish on the streets.(해석불가) In this essay, I will discuss what concerns it can cause and what need to be
done to prevent it happens. from happening.
Littered rubbish over the street generates
numerous problems. For one, they are not safe for commuters. It can bring safety issues to commuters. Since much rubbish
is thrown away near or along roadside they can damage tyres of cars and
bicycles which can result in serious accidents. Broken glasses and debris are
threats to pedestrians especially for those young children walking barefoot or
inappropriate foot wears. Other than that these rubbish are generally remained
there generally remains over long period of time, which spread rotten or unpleasant odor. They
attract insects such as flies, mosquitoes, and cockroaches. As a result, people’s
health can be compromised. (건강이 compromised되나요?)
In order to stop this unwanted phenomenon
we need supports from various fields. Firstly, the government can run campaigns
promoting people to clean up and take care of streets nearby. Government can also impose a
heavy fine to those litters. School and parents, however, can encourage youngster
behaviour appropriately, as well as inspiring them by being a good role model.
Once mature adults act adequately their children will surely be inspired.
Lastly, community can cultivate some cultures monitoring the streets to keep
them clean and encourage individuals to volunteer cleaning.
In conclusion, littering rubbish is perhaps
a very common problem of any societies. Nevertheless, as the troubles that are
caused by this matter are hard to neglects should not be neglected and, government, society and individual
should endeavour to diminish this problem.
주어진 시간 안에 실전처럼 적어보려 하니 의도하던 글과 많이 달라져 당황스럽네요. 첨삭 부탁드릴 때마다 느끼는 거지만 귀중한 시간 할애하여 도움 주시는 점 진심으로 감사합니다. |