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With the third industrial revolution,
people get used to buying various things and some of them allow their children
to buy whatever they want. Moreover, they just let their children do whatever
they want. This essay will explore why this kind of parenting is a bad way to
raise children and what consequences could happen to the children when they
grow up.
First of all, it is disadvantageous parents
allow their children to do whatever they want.(?) Firstly, they might don’t have
opportunities how to save money. Since children have less ability of selecting
what product is indeed necessary, if adults allow them to purchase something,
they tend to pay for whatever they want regardless of their budget. (?)Secondly,
considering that children can get items so easily if their parents are permissive,
they hardly cherish their items. It might leads to discarding the item so
easily and too soon. Finally, when it comes to misbehavior, children might
commit a crime if their parents do not care what their children do in school or
after school.(오프토픽)
For these reasons, permissive parenting
possibly results in raising a misbehaved adults. Due to the impulsive
purchasing habit, they might be broken when they become a grow-up. Habit of
throwing away products which is still new and useable make children
anti-environmental. They may don’t care the issue of environmental issues. Besides,
misbehaved children probably become a potential criminal when they are older.(포인트는 자유로운 교육?쪽인데 criminal이야기가 너무 갑자기 나오는 듯합니다 오프토픽에 더 가깝습니다)
In conclusion, allowing something whatever
children want can lead to make a spoiled child. Therefore, I firmly believe
parents should care about children’s behavior and consuming pattern.
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