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Some people think that the drawbacks of
technology have a negative impact on children. However, I firmly believe that
the benefits from technology are greater than the disadvantages. To begin with, children with new
technologies could learn better than other because they tend to have various learning
methods by them. It is a well-know fact that many students are likely to use mobile
applications and online learning programs for their study. For example, according
to the research conducted by the Tokyo University, the researcher found that
those who studied with high-tech devices tended to outperform those who did not
use them by 30%. As this shows, new technology could help students learn
efficiently.
Also,
new technologies allow children to improve their social networking scale
because of social networking services. Many experts believe that a lot of children
get used to utilize SNS as a socializing tool, and already make various-background
friends whom they could not even meet without SNS. For instance, one of my
cousins, she went to America to visit her friends last year, but they had not
actually met each other face to face before. Through the Facebook service, they
got to know each other, and built a firm friendship for years. This clearly
illustrates that new technologies could open children’s opportunities to meet
new people around the world.
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