. ACADEMIC WRITING TASK2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
Multi-cutural societies are mixtures of ethnic groups.
To what extent do you thing the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
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These days many cities are converted to multi-cultural cities in the world. In the process, there is a issue whether benefit of multi-culture outwights the disadvantages. Some people may oppose the multi-cultural cities, citing that those cities can make a problem in orgainzing citizen. Although some of those cities have problem in culture, diversity of culture gives more benefits. From a long consideration, I side with advantages of multi-cultural societies in terms of diversity and supply of differnet culture.
First of all, the problem in orgainzing citizen is happened in the early stage. Whenever meeting the new culture, people can be confused by unknown to deal with foreign culture. However, society can easily overcome this problem. As long period can make people accustomed with each other, societies can organize others. For example, Paris and london is famous for multi-cultural cities, but these cities had not such a reputation.
Most of multi-cultural societies have diversity of content, becuase each culture has specific contents of culture. In the multi-cultural societies, people can see foreign culture without visiting that nation. We don’t need to visit china for food becuase chineses towns exist around world. Diverse cultures make people happy.
In addtion to diversity, multi-cultural cities or societies have more different style of people than exclusive culture. In other words, multi-cultural cities can have diversity of labor pool. In multi-national company, diverse labor can give competitive advantages. For examle, many indian in london work at such finance market as bank, creadit company, and underwriting company. They have words of math, giving the advantages to british financial market.
All things considered, multi-cultrual societies can give more advantages than disadvantages. Some of negative effects of multi-culture has solved, and then such culture give more benefits.
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