Today, computer becomes one of the essential products in modern society. Some people have positive perspective about children`s computer using, however, the others were worried about its downsides. It is a reality like the both sides of coin, so in this essay, I will enumerate and discuss about both aspects.
First of all, using a computer everyday can have upsides for children`s study. Majority of children are interested in computer and they try to search more and more information. This habit can be a good merit when they do their assignments. Moreover, computer skills are vital factor in global world. Almost all public companies and social systems are based on computers. It means, if youngsters learn how to use computers when they are young, they will have more opportunities to get a job or fortunes.
On the other hand, some people are worried about computer addiction, which is a lingering question. According to the survey, approximately 75% of children do computer game more than 3 hours a day and even 17% of them have a difficult time in their study due to computer online games. Another significant problem is that a lot of young people have a healthy problem because of too much computer use. For instead, young people prefer using computer than playing outside. This sedentary life style generates children`s obesity, poor eyesight and other catastrophic side effects.
To sum up, children`s computer skills is definitely essential for their school life and their future job. However, they should know how to use computer in a positive and appropriate way. In order to make young people`s good computer habits, schools have to make proper curriculum about computer use, and also parents should encourage children`s regular exercise.
첨삭 좀 부탁드려요. 어떻게 하면 라이팅 점수를 좀 올릴 수 있을 까요?
요즘 드는 생각이, 단어가 부족해서 점수가 안오르는 것 같기도 한데, 막상
단어를 외우자니 외우고도 못쓰는 것도 많고, 괜히 쓰다가 잘못써서 점수가 더
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