As high technology has developed, space exploration become one of the important issues today. Some people believe the investment of the space exploration is necessity to catch up with advanced countries, however, others have begun to feel that the government should spend the money for the poor. In this essay, I will discuss about the both sides and point out my opinion.
It is obvious that country`s scientific fulfillments and technology represent the power of the a country. That is way why a majority of governments try to allot huge amount of budget for science field. Furthermore, the investment of space exploration is vital for human-being`s near future. If scientists do not have any appropriate knowledge or experiment, our science will stagnant (우리의 과학은 여기서 한국을 가리키시면 명시해주시고, our은 적절치 않은 것같습니다.)and there is no development to make people`s convenient life.
On the other hand, some people think it is not realistic so instead of using huge amount of budget for the space exploration, the government should spend that money for the citizens who are in severe poverty. Supporting science is important, but in the same time, the government should consider the poor specifically homeless children, the old and juvenile who can not take proper education because of their financial condition. People argue that it is more realistic politics in order to make equal society.
To sum up, definitely, the space exploration has become a popular area in science and if this field were developed, it can bring numerous technological benefits. With this reason, adequate amount of investment in the space exploration is necessity in modern society. At the same time, the government and making decisions should give the poor not only financial supports but also enough opportunities to receive education or get a job.
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