As people are growing, they are expected to face many competitions in school and community. As people get older, they face more and more competitions in schools and communities. Competition is assumed inevitable in the life to become a successful person. Therefore, it is insisted that competition in childhood are encouraged. However, some believe that children should be taught how to cooperate with their friends than to compete with them. competition. As these two opinions have has been become a controversial issue, I will discuss about both of views in depth, and conclude the essay with my opinion.
To begin with, competition may bring out positive outcomes such as increasing students' willingness wills to study in order to become better person than other children. This could be a natural characteristic for some children, but mainly, children do not perceive such not have such a perception of sense of inferiority or acheivement. If they do, it is only because of their parents. It would be believed that children may have such feelings due to their parents. Some parents force a child to be a perfect person, and it may increase the level of stress. Therfore, it could be said would say that moderate competition can encourage the children's skills and behaviours, but severe competition may cause negative impacts.
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ex) 첫문장: To begin with, competition acts as an incentive for students to study harder and become better people than their peers.
Generally speaking, children should not be stressed with do not need to be stressful due to high competitions as they are expected to have more of it in the near a soon future. That is why it is encouraged to teach how to cooperate with their friends. People are getting to be individualised so they do not know how to cooperate with other people. Once cooperation will have been taught teaching since they are were young, it may prevent individualism which and contribute to make community filled with warm-hearted people.
In conclusion, both competition and cooperation are important elements that children may have to acquire while they are growing. However, I strongly believe that teaching cooperation to children rather than encouraging competition will help to construct children's personality better.
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