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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter after , in response to your advertisement for a skiing course in Canada. The advertisement illustrated a wonderful background picture with information, including fairly reasonable prices and well organized schedule, which is enough to draw my attention. It will >> if 절의 동사가 현재므로 주절도 현재형의 조동사가 나옵니다 be really nice if I can enjoy this exciting course from the beginning to the end, but >> however는 문장을 이어줄 수 없습니다 I have certain obstacles regarding the time to stay during the whole course, leading to uncertainty.
As far as I know, the course finishes on Wednesday, whereas my winter school will start on Monday, which is the same week, and I must participate in the very first day. Not only that but I also need to move out to a new place as my contract with previous apartment will expiring on Tuesday, the day before the course finishes. These two major concerns hold my decision on applying the skiing course. Here, I would like to ask you a big favor. Is it possible to you to refund the extra money on the dates I do not go there? If this can be done without any worries, I am 100% sure to go to Canada for skiing as I wish.
I am looking forward to hearing it from you soon
Yours faithfully,
James
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