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This processes diagram illustrates the procedures of making chocolate and is followed by a pie chart that indicates how the price of a chocolate bar is made up .
The chocolate making process starts with grinding cocoa, which generates cocoa liquor and waste. Cocoa liquor is processed in two different ways. Some of it becomes to industrial chocolate, to which, afterwards, sugar and other ingredients are added along with cocoa butter. After being mixed with the ingredients, industrial chocolate is shaped into chocolate bars.
On the other hand, the rest of cocoa liquor goes through the pressing process, which produces two different types of cocoa products: cocoa butter and cocoa powder. Cocoa butter is added to industrial chocolate along with sugar and other ingredients as it mentioned above, while cocoa powder is to be used in food industry.
In the chart presenting the rate of the factors that make up the price of a chocolate bar, the cost of ingredients and ,overheads (37%) and the margin for supermarkets (34%) take up the major part. Tax is charged at a rate of 15% of the price and the chocolate company gains 10%. Only 4% is devoted to farmers.
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