Task 1. 아파트에 얼마전에 이사갔는데 문제가 생겼으니 주인한테 메일 보내라 니가 처음 이 아파트를 좋아했던 이유를 말하고, 뭔 문제가 생겼는지 말하고, 어떻게 해줬음 좋겠는지 말해라. Dear 로 시작해라. |
Dear Jane.
Hi. How are you going?
I have found some problems of using internet and washing machine so that I am writing a letter now. When I was inspecting this house, I remember that you said that there was no problem of accessing internet and you gave use(me 가 와야할 자리.. ^^) the password to access wireless internet. I typed that password more than ten times but still cannot access internet so far.
In addition, I was pretty pleasant with laundry area in the house when I inspected house last time, but yesterday I found out that the washing machine did not work properly.
Therefore, I would you like(would like you 조동사 다음엔 동사가 와야죠 ^^) to fix these problems as soon as possible. especially I have to do some office work at home so that please make these problems on the board.
I will be waiting (for )your respond as soon as possible. (I am waiting for your respond 또는 I am looking forward to your respond right away 도 괜찮을거 같아요 :] )
Thank you.
From. Jee
Task 2. 직업없이 집에서 집가족 돌보는 부모들 주로 엄마들 정부에서 월급 줘야된다는데 넌 어떻게 생각해? 어그리 디스 어그리? |
House workers have large(big) responsibilities to take care their family. Looking after someone is not very easy job without love. Therefore, some people may agree that government give some amount of money to house workers. however, in my opinion, it will be very difficult to implement payment system by government, as well as, hard to judge the people who aare virtually doing house work.
As people who have experience to do house work will understand how much it is hard to running everything smoothly and some extend, it is acceptable idea. Planning the diet, cooking, looking after children especially if they are young, cleaning the house and purchasing some products; food, clothes and etc. are the min roles as the house workers and these agenda should be well planned to be accomplished properly.
Therefore, some people maintain that it is acceptable idea which house workers deserve to be paid by government; however, there is other aspect of this view.
To implement this kind of new system, government will experience the difficulties to judge the amount of money and the people who will get paid. The government is basically running their work by tax from normal people. If the government announces that they will give bonus to house workers, it means that government will set higher tax to businesses and workers. In addition, it is very hard to audit whether house workers are doing their job appropriately or not. In this point of view, some people may abuse this law to take advantages of the government. For these reasons, I believe that government may spend money to establish other kinds of support system for house workers would be better than just paying for house workers.
House workers have vital role to operate their family well and it is not a easy job. However, rather than distributing certain amount money to them, government would be better to find other options to accommodate house workers.
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첫 마디에서 이 글의 중심은 사랑이겠구나 라고 강하게 생각하게 생각했지만 , 결론은 현실적인 문제여서 좀 아쉬웠어요 , 강렬한 결론을 내리실때 첫문단에서 강조했던 문구를 한번더 생각해보시면 좋을 듯 해요 ^^