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Becoming a Producing successful members of society is generally thought to be responsible for universities perceived as university's responsibility. Some people think that universities should provide students with useful knowledge and skills that is required in the company. Others believe schools should give students basic information and background for its their own benefit, regardless of whether the lecture is useful for an employer 고용주들이 왜 강의를 듣게 되는거죠? 대학교 수업강의 말씀하시는 건가요?. In my point of view, schools should direct students to become useful members in the working place.
#주제가 무엇인가요? 사회기여할수 있는 대학의 인재양성에 관한 글인것같은데 서론에서의 주장이 약하게 읽힙니다. 사회기여할 수 있는 인재양성인지, 기업이 요구하는 조건을 갖춘 고용자 (employee)양성인지 명확하게 밝혀주세요.
#employer: 고용주///employee:피고용인
At school, learners students can receive learn a lot of knowledge from lectures, books, teachers, and their peers. However, those are just only basic information and background for their wider community life after graduation. I believe universities do better take care of students from the very beginning of study freshman. Schools should provide the young generation with guidelines for their future study, in which students can find out “what are their strong points?”, “what are their goals?” and “how to achieve success”. By those very clear setting points, students can study with great belief and motivation. For examples, if students wants to become automotive engineers, universities should show a model engineer who can perform thermal, structure or fluid analysis by analytical of numerical method in a particular automotive company. After that, schools will should give them more details about lists of courses which they should need to study to that can help them be able to analyze some typical tasks like in those vehicle companies.
#사용하신 예가 약간 어중간한 느낌이 듭니다. 학교는 학생들에게 관심분야 전문가를 보여줘야한다라고 되어있고 바로 이어서 그 후 어떤 수업을 들어야 되는지 리스트를 제공해야한다라고 하셨습니다. 말이 되긴 하지만, 학교에서 직업에 필요한 지식을 제공해야된다는 것과는 약간 거리가 있어보입니다. 학생들의 롤모델 설정해 그들과의 교류를 통해 practical experience를 할수있도록 지원하다라고 바꿔보심이 어떨까 생각이 듭니다.
At the same time, schools should cooperate with those enterprises or related ones->companies/firms to provide students chances to have visual visiting->internships, study and experiments in real companies professional field. By this way, I think students will have great motivation to study with very clear target so that they can surely become an effective employee in companies near future.
In summary, universities should play an important role for the success of their students by providing them with details detailed instruction, logical and helpful subjects. With those backgrounds, the students will definitely have confidence in their working life. |