▶ Your Answer :
In some nations, students usually go to work or travel for a period before they start university studies. Even though this choice has both advantages and disadvantages, I personally believe that it will make strong positive influence to the young people.
Some people think that students have to go to universities immediately right after their high school, otherwise they will just waste their time for working or travelling. However, from my point of view, working can help students to earn money for future studies and at the same time they can also learn basic experiences, backgrounds, and necessary skills before going to school again. In addition, young students will discover their own interest and strong abilities, which help them to make correct choice for their major. For instants, Bessie Coleman has been well-known as the first African American pilot. She was born in a poor family and after high school she had to work at several jobs such as picking cotton, washing clothes to earn money for her tuition fee in for a flight school. She achieved her dream to become the first black pilot successfully because of not only her hard working but also flight experiences of learned from other soldiers whom she met at work. Through this typical example, we can see the importance of working experiences for people to become successful. Beside of working, some young generation choose to travel for a period of a year between high school and university studies.
Travelling relaxes gives relaxation to students after a long time of their high school studies. Furthermore, it also makes people to think thoroughly when they have chances to go oversea to meet multi-culture backgrounds, for examples. Furthermore, travelling experiences support people to develop skills of exploration, communication, and self planning or organization. By travelling, people will know what is going on in other parts of the world, how the people make money for living,... which will be good references for their job selection of the future career.
In summary, I believe that it is worthy for people to spend a period for working or travelling since their skills and thinking can be built up naturally by experiencing the real world.
I think your general writing skill is good, and I've changed some words to make it sounds better ^^ |