Your Answer ▼ Human’s life is changing faster with high technology inventions. I
would choose the car if I have to choose one invention that most affects human
life. Car is a means of transportation in a simple word, however, the but this means that car’s
appearance is a revolution. With the car, living circle has risen rise huge amount and all part
of human human’s life has changed. Car gives time for the humans. Nowadays, many cars are is on
the way. Car is truly amazing invention. 직접적으로 관련되어 있지 않은 부분인데 서술이 너무 길어요. 주제가 car에 대한 것이고 간단하게 이런장점/이런단점이 있다, 나는 어떤 입장에 동의한다, 정도로 간단한 글 도입부가 되도록 더 정리해주세요. But, it takes some problems. In this
essay, I will discuss about advantages and disadvantages of having a car and my
opinion.
Many people prefer to have their own car for the a comfortable life. The
person who should work far away from the house will understand that having a
car is a great way to save saving one's own time. Most of people don’t work next to their own
house door. It is difficult way and almost impossible. They can reduce the
distance as they commute. move house. Workers spend their life time on the road. A Car
reduces these this time every day. It is one of the most important advantages of owning a car.
Also, the person who takes the train, bus or tram for moving move place to place know
that how comfortable the car is. These two things are main advantages of having a own car.
There are many disadvantages of having one's own car.First of all, it costs a lot. a cost
is main disadvantage. Buying a A car is expensive. People save the money to purchase a
car for 2~3 years, or even more. Car costs almost similar with to one's annual income. Not
only cost of a car, but also maintenance expenditure can be a disadvantage.
Maintenance expenditure is including costs for insurance, repair, tax, and etc. Cars give the comfort
and save the time. But cars take it takes that much amount of money. These things should
be considered before buying a buy the car.자가용을 소유하는 것/ 아닌 것에 대한 설명으로 범위를 좁히기보다는 차 자체가 주는 이점/단점을 포괄적으로 풀어주면 더 좋을 것 같아요.
In summary, there are many advantages and disadvantages of the car. Main
advantages are related to time and comfort. Disadvantages are related to money. When
the people purchase the a car, they need to consider about what is important for
their life first. |