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It is a common belief that international events could not influence influent our lives. However, I firmly believe that it should be is dealt with importantly.
To begin with, we could know about other countries' country’s life features through the international events. We could understand each other through the process of meeting and talking taking about international events as well like the Olympics, World Cup, Olympic, Worldcup and so on. According to people participated in these events, they stated that they had good experiences because people who had different cultures learned methods of another different life styles. Moreover, they said that these events should be held hold frequently and they also must are willing to participate participated in the events. it. 좀 더 요지가 한 가지로 정리될 수 있도록 명확한 '장점'을 강조해서 정돈해주면 좋을 것 같아요. 다른 삶의 특징에 대해 알 수 있어서 좋다는 것은 결국 '견문을 넓힐 수 있어서 좋다'라거나 '시야가 넓어진다'와 같은 이점으로 연결할 수 있어요. On top of that, these international events could give messages all of the world that we are the one. There are many problems in the world such as wars, starvation, starvings, drought and so on. Through some these formal events, we can be aware of announced these problems to the world and could give help to people help suffering from various situations. We could resolve resolved the problems like starvation starving through various ways such as donation or funding based on international events. the way to contribute to them. Also, in the case of wars, we could get the international agreement to stop the war for resolving problems. To sum up, I think these Iinternational events could contribute can allow people to know each other between world citizens and to help people in need needed of warming warm hands. For these reasons, international events should be held hold more and more and many people would attend to these events. |