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Information and knowledge are, indeed, priceless. Some argue
that open sourcing the knowledge to others is beneficial in the fields of science,
research, business and academia. Others claim that certain degrees of knowledge should do not be shared come without a price. In my opinion, intellectual property should be
owned by any people if so desired at no cost. 주제가 묻는 것은 과학 연구/사업/학계의 특정 발견들이 그 분야 안에서 가능한 많이 공유되는 것에 대한 설명입니다. 현재 서론에서는 크게 주제를 벗어나는 부분은 없으나, '가격'이나 '모두에게 공개'라는 키워드가 자칫 논점을 어긋나게 할 수 있으니 내용 전개시 유의해야 할 것 같습니다.
First of all, it is true that certain kinds of intellectual
properties that are essential do cost enormous funds to discover, thus require
to charge a higher price to create a profit. 사례 제시 이전에 설명을 더 보완해주세요. 형평성의 측면에서 안된다거나 최초 지식 발견자의 지적 재산권을 생각했을 때 바로 공유하는 건 안 좋다거나 하는 식으로 주된 '이유'가 함께 제시되어야 합니다. For example, pharmaceutical
companies usually have 20 years of right to solely sell any new drugs that they develop
at a wished price before the inventing company has to releases the formula of
the drug, so that they have an ample ampule amount of time to achieve targeted earnings.
Other companies, then, can start selling generic brands of the same drug at a much
cheaper price. 이 사례가 주장과 관련해 갖는 함의를 설명해주세요.
On the other hand, allowing intellectual property to be
available for everyone can promote further opportunities in development of
science, research, business and academia. For instance, when Google was first established,
the two young developers had a buyer who offered millions of dollars for the
company. However, they declined the offer and open their source to the public. sourced all the data. Later,
numerous ventures appeared using the information that was collected, which
resulted in booming of IT business. In addition, making the research findings
that are accessible for the public can mean that they are utilized for the
greater good in the field of science. For instance, using the above example
regarding newly invented drugs, if the generic medications were available for a
cheaper price sooner, more people should be able to afford the medicine and to
be treated. Ultimately, this action can even save more lives of human beings.
In conclusion, in a society that is driven by the newest
knowledge and information, acquiring intellectual property is also a power. Using
this power to earn money is adequately important to maintain the healthy
balance of investment and profit. However, it is critical to release
intellectual property to the public in order to empower and enhance other
fields of research, science, business and academia, which and also to benefits the
greater good. |