Your Answer ▼ People hold different perspectives on the purpose of
obtaining a new language. While some say that people try to learn a foreign
language only for working and traveling, others disagree with that, claiming being
fluent in a foreign language has other valuable things. In this essay, I will explore
both views with my thoughts.
One the one hand, there are reasons why some say speaking a new language is beneficial in only working and traveling. As the world is becoming more globalized, a
business and tourism field is also becoming combined among between countries. With this
phenomenon, it is undeniable that the first thing one should prepare to be
involved in global workforce is required languages language skills required in order to communicate and
make a favorable harmony with foreign workers. Moreover, due to al the difference different of languages, when people travel overseas, a certain amount of money is required
on when hiring a bilingual tour guide and buying translated information books. Thus, it is
understandable that people say these two areas are the only reasons as the high importance of learning foreign languages is easily seen in those fields above.
Nevertheless, other groups are arguing that being able to
speak foreign languages contains more values. Being aware of the backgrounds and
cultures of a another community would be an excellent example. Since a language is the
most vital foundation and component of a society, knowing their language would
be of great benefit to understanding natives and cultures. This will enable us to have not
only businesslike conversations or simple dialogs during trips but also
advanced conversations and close relationships with locals. 여행과 일 '외의' 이유로도 외국어 학습이 가치가 있다는 점을 설명해야 하는데, 현재 내용은 여행에서 더 도움이 되고 일에서 더 도움이 되는 부분들처럼 보이기 쉽기 때문에 표현/흐름 수정이 필요할 것 같습니다. What is more, because of
the numerous documents and books which are not yet translated into all languages
in this world, bilingual speakers will be richer in knowledge by reading more
ranges of words.
In conclusion, it seems that both views have their own strong
viewpoints. However, the latter view is more convincing to me: there seems to
be not only some of the well-known merits of obtaining a new language but also more
hidden advantages speaking. 결론 문단은 기본적으로 본론의 내용을 갈무리하는 역할을 합니다. 본론에 들어가 있지 않은 새로운 정보가 결론에 들어가는 것은 감점요인이 될 수 있으므로 본론2에서 나의 입장을 함께 소개한 뒤에 결론에서 한 번 더 정리하는 형태로 흐름 정리가 필요합니다. |