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Modern society has participated in polluting the environment. One of the biggest threats thread we are facing in this century is global warming. It is caused by the increased carbon dioxide emission level. It will endanger the whole human kinds globally. However, there are three methods which can help to reduce the damage to the environment: to rReduce, reuse and recycle. 일종의 표제어(3R: reduce, reuse, and recycle)처럼 활용하는 것도 나쁘지는 않겠지만, three methods라고 언급한만큼 정확하게 to-v로 제시하는 편이 나을 것 같아서 수정했으니 참고해주세요.
Firstly, reducing the CO2 emission level will significantly help to reduce the effect on global warming. In order to do this, For example, government should encourage people to use renewable energy such as solar power to replace burning coal for energy resources. Moreover, individuals should consider to use public transportation instead of using their own car. Furthermore, government should ban the type of cars which have high emission level and encourage companies in developing electronic cars. As a responsible business, plastic bags should be avoided as they it cannot be dissolve and it will they release poison gas when burning. Citizens can prepare their own bags when shopping to reduce excessive use of plastic bags. Finally, using only use any energy source only when necessary, turning turn off all electronics devices when not in use not using is preferable.
Secondly, reuse is beneficial for the environment. For example, offices can encourage double sides printing instead of one side. Many companies already go paperless bill to their customers in order to limit the harm to the planet and use the printed paper as draft to reuse. Clothing industry can donate out of season products the off season clothing to charity and help the second hand shop for their resources.
Finally, when things finally become rubbish, recycle can be done to reduce and renew. For example, separate paper in bins can help to turn paper them into recycled recycle paper and at the same time, less trees will be chopped. Trees can help to absorb the CO2 and turn them back into oxygen. 갑자기 나무가 이런 기능을 한다고만 설명하는 것은 연결이 어색해요. 이러이러한 기능을 하는 나무가 줄어들어서 지구온난화에 악영향을 미치는데 종이 재활용이 이를 완화하는 데 도움을 줄 수 있다, 하는 식으로 구체적으로 주제와 연결된 설명이 필요합니다.
In conclusion, to reduce, reuse and recycle can be encouraged encourage within the society to reduce the harm to the environment and reduce the global warming. |