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In modern society, a building has various kinds of purposes and functions. People tend to construct buildings with better outlooks. I do think this is a favorable idea, however, but I do believe that the original purpose of any building should be focused most. Admittedly, good appearance of a building triggers numerous benefits. With attractive outlook, constructions will be experiencing higher number of people coming regardless of what it has inside. A café or restaurant, for examples , hooking customers’ attention with favorable outlook would be of great help to being be interested and loved by those who consider the importance of mood or atmosphere when they go out to eat or hang out with friends. Further, significant design generates a memorable expression, so that a community would remember some beautiful constructions as a landmark. 디자인이 더 좋은 건물이 더 많은 사람들을 attract할 수 있다는 내용은 특정 용도의 건물에만 한정되는 부분이기 때문에 주장을 일반화해서 설득력 있게 풀어내는 데는 한계가 있을 수 있습니다. 좀 더 보편적인 측면에서 디자인이 인간에게 주는 심미적인 가치를 언급하는 편이 더 설득력이 높을 수 있을 것 같아요. However, I personally consider about the aim of building as the most important element on any building. Putting too much concentration on design, builders could miss some very necessary elements such as insufficient doors or windows. From my own experience in a modern design designed house, the house owner was complaining about a the window on the top of the house which was never able to be reached without a ladder. It made the owner them nearly impossible to clean up the window. Thus, due to the possible malfunctions caused by over considerations on appearances, the aim of building must be on the original purpose. 디자인에 과하게 신경쓰면 좋지 않은 점을 설명할 때 '본래의 목적을 잃게 되는 것'과 연결되는 내용을 함께 제시해줄 필요가 있어 보여요. 청소가 어려웠다는 설명은 '건물의 용도를 고려해 설계하는 것'과는 크게 관련이 없습니다. 단순히 디자인에만 신경쓰면 좋지 않다고 이야기하는 것은 '본래 건물의 용도'에 집중하는 것이 더 중요하다는 나의 입장을 전달하기 어렵습니다. In conclusion, although it is good-looking structures that provide take advantages in some ways, builders should be aware of whatplays the most vital roles of on the buildings they build up. |