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Nowadays, some people believe that money is the most important aspect for a happy life. Regarding this, I understand why people think like that, but I disagree with them. This essay will discuss the reasons why I disagree that money is essential for our happiness than other things in detail. It is seem that money is very essential in our life as if we don’t have much money we have to face a lot of dangerous and sad situations in our lives and in particular, in emergency time. And I also little bit agree that there is no doubt that we need suitable amount of money for our basic life for eating food and wearing clothes. However while I agree about that, I disagree with the idea that it is the best method to get happiness. Firstly, it is hard to say that wealth is the most important priority to attain bliss This is because we can easily find a number of people who have a lot of money but don’t have gratitude and peace in life. There is some interesting information, according to some newspapers articles, not all of country but in some poor countries such as the kingdom of Bhutan, the survey on the happiness rate show that their happiness level is higher than that of their peers in the rich countries. the reason is that they can enjoy their life amidst nature and live a simple life. Second, although high-income nations and rich groups earn a large amount of money, they also have to spend a lot of time and efforts to achieve and retain the status. I believe that it will be quite stress for them to compete with rivals at school. Later, they have to face the same stress while seeking a job. such a form of life means giving up all of the leisure time. in a few case, some people don’t need to study and find a job. Since they have a lot of money by being born in a rich family. However, it seems that they also hard to get any happiness feeling from the fact since to them, it is nothing special. However it seems that they also find it hard to enjoy happiness. It might be so, because rich people always have their bag full of expensive things. For them it is nothing new and special. So, what is needed for people to feel well being ? in my opinion, the close and healthy relationship with family and friends is far more important thing in life. In addition, nourishing a big dream which one really desire to achieve and an enjoyable hobby would be a good method to achieve happiness
I also think that suitable amount of work also helps them to gain happiness. But we don’t need too much greed. To sum up, I disagree with the opinion that money is the most important aspect in getting the happiness. Through the reasons mentioned above, i strongly believe that a lot of crucial and vital aspects exist to attain bliss.
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