This charts indicate the reason
First of all, the percentage of students who study for interest increases dramatically from 10 % at under 26 aged group to 70% at over 49 aged group. On the other hand, the rate of people studying for career shows a
Second, the proportion of people supported by employers drops from around 60% to nearly 30% in the younger aged groups. And then the rate of older people relied on employers rises slightly to just over 40%.
To sum up, this charts show that younger people
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