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It is great worth of discussing whether, as
part of high school programs, free community service such as teaching sports to
younger children or the methods of how to use high-tech devices to elder citizen should be
mandatory programs or not.
Some
people would insist that it should be volunteer work, not mandatory programs.
On the other hand, some people would assert that it should be compulsory to
high school students.
I
believe that the idea would give lessons to the students by having mandatory community
service time.
First
of all, the students can gain lots of experiences. To be more specific, by taking
part in a various kinds of community work, they will encounter much more cases outside
of school. For example, when I was a high school student, I had to do volunteer
work for a local community. society because we were short of volunteers. However,
eventually, I ended up enjoying community work, and iIt taught me a lot. 인원이 부족했는데 내가 실제로 그것을 즐겁게 했다는 내용은 불필요한 내용이고 연결도 어색합니다. 처음에는 의무라서 별로 내키지 않았는데 실제로 해보니 많은 것을 배울 수 있어서 유익하고 좋았다, 하는 식으로 주제와 연결지어서 최대한 구체적인 표현으로 제시해주는 것이 좋습니다. Specifically, I only had heard of poverty from a textbook, but I could feel the
effects on people of poverty in my bones from the experience.
Secondly, they can be educated how to
co-operate with others. According to research conducted by Student Behavior Association,
89 percent of students who have done mandatory community work showed are shown high
sense of teamwork. team-work. This is mainly because that they had had to faced the
situations that they had never been in, so they had to put a lot of efforts on the projects
together.
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In conclusion,
by helping other people as a part of local society, the students will gain
experiences and the sense of co-operation with other people.
In
this regard, I assent with the given statement that~주제 내용 간략하게 적어주세요.
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