교수한테서 직접 합격 통보 메일을 받아서, 회신 메일을 쓰려고 하는데 한번 검토부탁드려요~
Dear Prof. AAA,
(붙여줘서 감사합니다)
I thank you most sincerely for having me into your Ph.D. program.
I'm as happy as can be for being admitted to UT-Austin, one of the most prestigious universities in the world.
Also, I appreciate your considerate calling to your research projects which would be precious opportunities to work with you.
(3월에 campus visit가 있는데, 거기에 왔으면 좋겠다고 교수님이 언급했는데, 못가겠다는 내용입니다)
With regard to campus visits, I'm really eager to see you and discuss my doctoral study plan with you, but I'm afraid I can't make it because I'm living on a tight budget. Expenses of traveling from Korea to Austin cost too much. I am really sorry I will not be able to attend.
(funding은 없고, 3월 20일까지 결정을 해서 달라는 교수의 메일에 대한 응답입니다.)
And I'll inform you my decision by March 20. Due to the limited funding availability, I need to think it twice before making a final decision. But I guess it's possible for me to support myself during the first year of Ph.D.
Again, thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
BBB
요렇게만 메일 보내려는데, 정중한 표현을 좀 더 추가할만한게 있는지 모르겠네요, 선배님들 검토 한번 부탁드려요!