■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :Should people adapt to the now surrondings or should they refuse to change?
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▶ Your Answer :
people often face with the new surroundins.In this situation, While some are accliminate with the new environment, others refuse to change thier environment. In fact, someone who apt to change can arrive in any surroundings
if someone is to live in another country, he will met with the country's customs different from one's custom. so he often will conflict with authentic residents in different thought and mind. but as he apts to the new surrondings after long period, he will alleviate the problems that he met at first time. If he tries to abandone fundamental own's thought and change the environment rather than refuse to change, he feels comfort on his live as soon as possible.
So to speak, since people can't not live only in limited environment, they sould apts to the benign surroundings so that they can broaden their thoughts and mature their acts | |
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