▶ Your Answer :
The
reading passage contends that coal benefits of coal mining can be fully explained by three
theories. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that
contradict this argument.
First
of all, the speaker argues that the coal mining demands a complicated process. This
is because the amount of coal located close to the earth’s surface is limited,
so people have to dig deep tunnels. In addition, highly technical workers are
needed for its complex process. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim
that coal is very simple to mine.
Second,
according to the lecturer, it is unlikely that coal it is cheap to transport. 문단이 새롭게 시작되는 부분에서는 지시대명사보다는 키워드를 정확히 밝혀주는 편이 좋아요. This
is supported by the fact that coal is so heavy that transporting it requires a
lot of transportation methods such as trucks and ships. Thus, movement of coal
is expensive because of the cost of various transportation. This refutes the
reading passage’s assertion that the cost of transportation of coal is low.
The
final point made by the lecturer is that the coal industry does not generate a
plenty of jobs. The reason is that new machines to mine coals have been
developed. Therefore, the number of workers in the coal industry tends to decline. This
counters the reading passage’s argument that the coal industry provides a
myriad of jobs for people.
Comment : 두 지문의 대립되는 포인트와 주요 설명을 잘 요약해주셨어요. 내용 검토하실 때 수일치 오류나 오탈자 꼼꼼하게 봐주시고 비슷한 내용이 반복되는 부분은 없는지에 유의하시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 많으셨습니다~! Integrated Writing Rubrics Score 5/5 A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading. The response is well organized, and occasional language errors that are present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content or connections. |