◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- enroll 에서 [r] 발음에 더 신경써주시길 바랍니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- about the new policy that the tennis class at recreation center will charge free to every students who enroll
-> about the new policy which made tennis class at the recreation center free for all registered students
- the reason that she is very excited
-> the reason why she is very excited
- whether there are students who are excited in it they have to pay 15 dollars for each classes
-> 해석이 어려운 문장입니다.
- even though she plays sometimes tennis
-> even though she does not play tennis often?
- she can find people who enrolled the class
-> 정확한 의미 파악이 어려운 어색한 문장입니다.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 주요 포인트를 잘 넣어주셨으나 설명에서 'whether there are students who are excited in it..', ' she can find people who enrolled the class' 와 같이 이해가 잘 안가는 부분들이 있습니다.
◆ Comments
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