◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- recently에서 [-cent] 부분을 조금만 더 강하게 발음해주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- The two cities I have been visited
-> The two cities I have visited
- There is two major difference between them
-> There are two major differences between them
- I visited two cities (일반적인 'city'를 뜻합니다)
-> I visited the two cities (특정 도시 - '서울' & '제주'를 뜻합니다)
- The types of building
-> The types of buildings
- In Seoul, there was a lots of tall buildings
-> In Seoul, there were lots of tall buildings *a lot of / lots of
- there was low building and traditional one
-> there were low buildings and traditional ones
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 문법 실수들이 많이 아쉽습니다.
- 기본 문법에서 실수가 자주 있으면 큰 감점을 받게되니 주의해주세요.
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