◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- realize [r] 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- one of the experience that I have in a cafe
-> one of the experiences that I had in a cafe
- everything that I just said
-> everything that I said
- he's in my same age
-> he's the same age as me
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 내용이 굉장히 지저분합니다. 남자와의 대화에 집중해서 설명하시지 마시고 I met someone at the cafe. He was studying next to me and suddenly he approached me. We talked for more than an hour and exchanged our numbers. Now he is my bestfriend. 이런식으로만 해주세요. 그렇지 않으면 이야기가 너무 멀리 가버립니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 질문이 Talk about a time you met a person at a cafe. Explain what you talked about with the person. 이것처럼 느껴집니다. 질문에서 주어진 memorable그리고 cafe라는 단어에 집중하시면 좋겠습니다.
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