◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- resume, remain에서 [r]발음이 매우 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- award from volunteering to the
-> award for voluteering at the
- agrees about it
-> agrees with it
- there has been shorthanded
-> both need specific skills
- threw a concert
-> hosted a concert (throw는 party에만 써주세요)
- will remain in the script
-> will remain in the transcript
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 주요 포인트 정리를 잘 해주셨습니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 흐름이 많이 끊기는 것 같아요. 더 자연스럽게 스피킹을 해주시면 좋겠습니다.
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