◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- A woman is having worries because
-> a woman is worried because
- recently they have to add some people
-> 최근에 그들은 새로운 사람들을 추가해야 한다 - 어법이 맞지 않습니다
-> recently they added some people (최근에 그들은 새로운 사람들을 추가했다).
- because how can she word out to everyone
-> because it's hard to tell everyone (그리고 무엇을 말하는 것인지 어려운지도 말씀해주셔야해요)
- even though they are modified the script
-> even though they have to modify the script (?)
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 문제점 요약 - 해결책 두가지 요약 - 더 나은 해결책 선택 - 이유 1 - 이유 2 이렇게 구조 잡아주세요. 중간에 여자가 말한 것들은 요약하실 필요 없습니다 (It's impossible to inform people about the changed date 등). 바로 I think the second option is better because as she said, it's hard to tell people of the new date if she postpones the musical. Also, even though they have to modify the script, the actors have at least some sort of experience so it should not be a problem for them to memorize and practice the new script.
◆ Comments
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