◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- it gives guarantees for ___________ 빈 칸 부분에 단어들을 더 정확하게 발음해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- in the lecture professor suggests
-> in the lecture the professor suggests
- customers who are worrying about the products that they just bought can be malfunctioned and not work
-> 최근에 그들은 새로운 사람들을 추가해야 한다 - 어법이 맞지 않습니다
-> recently they added some people (최근에 그들은 새로운 사람들을 추가했다).
- so the professor tells it is very important
-> so the professor explains that it is very important
-> tell은 목적어가 있어야해요. I will tell you later, then he tells the audience, she told me that
- it gives guarantees for overall qualities?
-> 해석이 안됩니다.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 주요 포인트를 잘 넣어주신 것 같습니다. 두가지 방법에 대한 설명이 조금 부족해서 아쉽습니다. so the professor says it is very important to let the customers know that the company will stand for them 이 부분은 삭제하고. One way the company can use to let the customers know that they stand for them is _____ . This will reassure them because _____ . The second way is_______ . This is about ______ . 이렇게 간결하게 정리해주시면 좋겠습니다
◆ Comments
- 조금 더 정리된 요약이 필요해보입니다.
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