◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- The woman disagrees with the idea that the university will increase ..
-> The woman disagrees with the idea that the university should increase
- building operating hour
-> The building's operating hours
- The building is so scary late at night
-> It can be scary to stay in the building until late at night
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주요 포인트들이 언급되어있고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- hesitation, pause 등만 조금 줄여주시면 될 것 같습니다.
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