◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- cope with 에서 [p] 발음이 살짝 [f] 처럼 들리고 있습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- he describes that they have product have malfunction or breaking
-> he describes a situation where customers are worried about products malfunctioning or breaking
- if the TV it has a malfunction or it is broken
-> if the TV is malfunctioning or broken
- the salesperson can said to customers
-> the salesperson can say (tell) to the customers
- if it is go wrong then it could be repaired
-> if it goes wrong then it can be repaired
- then the customer could easy and they can buy it
-> then the customer can feel more safe about buying the product
- they worried about it is too complicated
-> they와 it이 무엇을 의미하는지 알 수 없습니다.
-> they are worried that it is too complicated to use the products
- also in the TV case
-> taking the TV case as an example again,
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 설명을 잘 해주셨으나, 문법 실수 등으로 인해 설명이 이해가지 않는 부분들이 많습니다.
◆ Comments
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