◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- species 발음이 매우 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the professor describe an example
-> the professor describes an example
- she explain shark and dolphin
-> she explains sharks and dolphins
- they share similar characters
-> they share similar characteristics
- they share a similar environment ocean
-> they share a similar environment which is the ocean
- they have narrow bodies and it helps
-> they have narrow bodies which help
- it looks not obvious
-> it does not look obvious
- it help them move nice and quickly
->it helps them move easily and quickly
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주요 포인트들이 모두 언급되어있습니다. 그러나 설명이 조금 부족한 부분들이 있습니다. 예를 들어 펭귄 예시의 경우 조금 더 자세한 설명이 필요해보입니다.
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