◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- however, a person receive about 80 emails a day
-> however, a person receives about 80 emails a day
- they just glance it over
-> they just glance them (80 emails) over
- this might give negative effect on their business
-> this might give a negative effect on their business / this might negatively affect their business
- there are too many internet advertisement exposure
-> there is too much internet advertisement exposure
- so the company do not
-> so the company does not
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 모든 디테일이 들어가 있고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 토플 스피킹 시험은 1분이라는 짧은 시간안에 답을 마쳐야하는 어려운 시험입니다. 그렇기 때문에 엄청 빨리 말하지 않는 이상 모든 내용을 다 넣기가 힘들어요. ETS도 이 점을 알고 있을거에요, 구체적인 디테일까지 요구하지 않습니다. 꼭 다 넣어야한다는 생각을 조금 버리시면 더 좋은 스피킹이 나올 수 있어요. 요약 연습을 잘 해주세요.
예를 들어, First she explains email. Email is ~ 이런식으로 새로운 문장을 시작하는 것 보다, First she explains email which is ~ 바로 연결해주세요.
Email is a very important communication tool these days. A person receives about 80 emails a day and they cannot read everything so what they do is they just glance it over and read what seems to be urgent. However, this is very risky because they might overlook what is important and this might give negative effect on their business.
- 여기에서 더 요약을 해주세요.
The professor explains that people only read emails that seem urgent because they do not have the time to go through every single email that they receive. However, this is very risky because they might miss important emails which then can negatively affect their business.
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