◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- The man is having trouble with the _____________ paper. 빈 칸 단어 (field trip?)를 더 정확하게 발음해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- because most of them were scribbled down
-> because the words on most of them were scribbled down
- Second, school need to save their expenses and they need to spend saved money for more urgent matters
-> Second, the school needs to save as much as possible incase they need the money for more urgent matters in the future.
- talk about good and bad about the field trip
-> talk about the good and bad things about the field trip
- rather than check good, bad, perfect or something like that
-> rather than choosing between words like 'good', 'bad', perfect.
- I recommend first option for him
-> I recommend the first option for him
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- "to ask directly in the class", "to simplify the question" 으로 포인트를 잡아주셨는데 더 명확하게 해주셔야 할 것 같아요. "to ask the survey questions directly to the students in class", "to change the questions to get more simple answers"
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◆ Comments
- 논리적인 설명이 좋습니다.
- 몇가지 포인트를 더 명확하게 잡아주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
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