◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the most memorable experience I had in cafe
-> the most memorable experience I had in a cafe
- it was a new year's eve
-> it was new year's eve
- to cheer up myself I just go out and find a little cafe
-> to cheer up myself I went out and found a small cafe
- celebrating a new year's ceremony
-> celebrating new years
- so I just go there and talked to them
-> so I just went there and talked to them
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 이야기를 잘 설명하신 것 같습니다. 주제에도 맞는 것 같아요. 묘사를 잘 해주셨습니다.
◆ Comments
- 과거에 대한 이야기는 무조건 과거 시제로 해주셔야 합니다. 시제가 계속 바뀌어서 어색했어요. 시제를 잘 맞춰주세요.
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