◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 틀린 발음은 없습니다.
- 그러나 uhh, 등의 hesitation이 조금 많습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- swimming class is the time when I did not want to do something
-> swimming class is one thing that I did not want to do when I was young
- I had a big fear about swimming
-> I had a big fear of swimming
- so I almost died
-> so I almost drowned
- swimming class starts every weekdays at 7am
-> swimming class starts every weekday at 7am
- t took one hour without break time so I was so tired
-> it was one hour long without any break time
- I had a physically burden about the swimming class
-> it was physically burdensome for me
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유 모두 적절하고 설명도 잘 되어있습니다.
- 마지막에 질문과 다시 연결해주는 문장을 넣어주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. For these reasons, one thing that I did not want to do was going to my swimming class.
◆ Comments
- 조금 더 스피킹이 매끄럽고 좋은 흐름을 유지할 수 있도록 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. uhh와 같은 hesitation도 없애고 설명도 조금 더 구조를 갖춰서 해주시면 좋겠어요.
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