◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I prefer university students should support financially by their parents
-> I think that university students should be supported financially by their parents
- University students needs study hard
-> university students need to study hard
- they need lots of times to study
-> they need lots of time to study *time - 불가산 명사
- the chance to have a time to study will decrease
-> 어색한 표현입니다.
- the tuition fee for university is extremely high
-> the university tuition fees are extremely expensive
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문법 실수들이 많습니다. 특히, 가장 중요한 첫번째 문장에 문법 오류가 많아요. 문법 위주로 공부를 해주시면 좋겠습니다.
예상 점수: 21-22