. Describe two singers you enjoy listening to. Explain the difference between them.
I like two singers whose songs suit my taste.
First, I like the singer called Jang-ki-ha who is known for his unique lyrics. He observes the world carefully to write songs that are closely related to people's lives. He has a wild voice and his songs are often made with slow rhythm. He started producing music later in life after having worked as a librarian.
Second, I like Seo-eun-jung. She often sings a song about strong love between a woman and a man with her soft voice. Most of her songs are often (have) bright (atmosphere) with fast rhythm. Also she began her career as a musician early in life after she had been selected by an audition program.
These are the two singers I like the most.
2. Some people like to watch TV news programs on a daily basis. Others prefer to watch these shows every now and then. Which do you prefer and why?
I prefer to watch the news programs daily rather than every now and then.
First, the news programs are helpful for our lives. They provide people useful information that can affect people's lives. For example, recently I learned that there has been a change in property law after watching news. (I came to know a change to the law about the real estate after I viewed the program.) Since I was informed about it, I could do my job properly. (So I could deal with my task related to the law more without disruption.)
Second, I have more topics to talk to my friends about. (can have more conversation topics through the news programs.) I often share ideas about what I watch in the programs with my friends. For example, after watching news about deforestation, (when I realized that much of the tropical forests are destroyed by the news,) I discussed how to solve the problem with my friends.
For these reasons, I prefer to watch the news programs each day.
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