3. According to the reading, the writer argues that the university should tear down the auditorium. (For what reasons?)
The man does not think it is a good idea.
First, he says that the building has a historical value. To be specific, it is one of oldest structures which have a historical and architectural value the first built structrues on campus. When consdiering the situation that not many old buildings remain on campus, (Awkward sentence) the auditorium acts as a reminder of the university's past.
--> Better to mention: since not many of the old buildings are still on campus / since most of old buildings are demolished~
Second, he says that tearing down the old building cannot save money. To be specific, demolishing the building and building new one is a very expensive process. Also the new building need repairs. which means that the universality has to pay for the maintenance fee. (Wrong sentence, what does that mean?)
--> Avoid repeat the same sentence like " building~ building"
For these reasons, the man oppose to the writer's idea.
* 스펠링 에러가 상당히 많이 보이는 편이에요.
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