◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- efficiency의 발음이 조금 부정확합니다.
- level 발음이 조금 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- professor should permit record the lecture
-> professors should permit students to record the lecture
- based on my personal experience, I took a
-> To take my personal experience as an example, I took a
- recording a lecture can helpful to
-> recording a lecture can be helpful to
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 제시하신 포인트가 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 발음과 문법에 조금 더 신경을 써주세요.
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